Lesson 31: Writing a diary entry

✍️ WRITING (40 Lessons)🟣 D. Functional Writing

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Objective

I can write a simple diary entry about my day using the date, I-voice, a small moment, and my feelings.

Materials

Mini-lesson — What is a diary entry?

A diary (or journal) is a place where you write about your own life.

A diary entry is usually:

  • about one day or one small moment,
  • written with I (I went, I felt, I saw),
  • short and honest,
  • often written in a notebook.

Many diary entries have these parts:

  1. Date — When did this happen? (Today, or a real date)
  2. Small moment — One thing that happened
  3. Detail — What you saw, heard, or did
  4. Feeling — How you felt about it

Example diary entry:

  • Today
  • After school I went to the park with my friend.
  • We played tag and went down the big slide.
  • I felt happy and a little tired.

You are mostly writing for yourself about your own day.

Picture strip: "A page from a diary"

Guided Practice — Plan one diary entry

Use the Tracing Pad to warm up with diary words. Then plan and write one diary entry on paper.

  1. Choose your small moment:
    Think about one time from today or yesterday. For example:
    • a game at recess,
    • reading time,
    • dinner with your family,
    • a walk or a trip.
  2. Warm up on the Tracing Pad:
    Trace short words like today, school, friend, happy, tired, or diary.
  3. Say your diary entry out loud:
    In I-voice, say:
    • When it happened (Today, After school, At night).
    • What you did (I played a game. I read a book.).
    • One detail (who was there, where you were, or what you used).
    • How you felt (I felt proud. I felt calm. I felt excited.).
  4. Write in your notebook:
    On your ruled paper or in a small notebook, write:
    • Line 1: a date or time line (Today, or a real date)
    • Line 2: what happened in one short sentence
    • Line 3: a detail sentence
    • Line 4: a feeling sentence (how you felt)
  5. Check your diary entry:
    Does it tell about one small moment? Does every sentence start with a capital letter and end with a period? Can you read it back smoothly?

The Tracing Pad is only for warm-up. Your real diary entry should be written in your notebook or on paper.

Tracing Pad
Tracing snapshot for print

Drag & Drop — Build diary entries in order

Each set has four lines from one diary entry: a date line, what happened, a detail, and a feeling. Drag the lines into the best order to build one diary page.

On the device:
For each diary page, drag the four lines into the empty boxes on the page. When they are in the right order, they make a neat diary entry in I-voice.

On paper:
Choose two finished diary entries and copy all four lines into your notebook. Keep each line on its own line and use your best handwriting.

March 12, 2025 — After-school park time. I went to the park with my friend. We played on the swings and the slide. I felt happy and a little tired.
March 11, 2025 — Breakfast helper. I woke up early and went to the kitchen. I helped set the table with plates, cups, and spoons. I felt proud that I helped my family.
March 13, 2025 — Library time at school. I went to the school library with my class. I chose a picture book about animals and sat on the rug. I felt calm and curious while I read.
March 14, 2025 — Rainy night at home. I stayed inside and built a tall block tower. I listened to the rain tap on the window. I felt cozy and safe in my room.
March 15, 2025 — Saturday bike ride. I rode my bike around the park path. I rang my bell and saw ducks by the pond. I felt excited and brave on my bike.

Quick Check — Writing a diary entry

Answer each question about diary entries. This is a gentle 10-question check.

What is a diary?

Which is a good way to start a diary sentence?

What should a diary entry be about?

Why is it helpful to write the date or time at the top?

Which sentence is a good detail for a diary entry?

What should you write to show your feelings in a diary?

How long should your sentences be in a diary?

Why is neat handwriting important in a diary?

How can you check if your diary entry makes sense?

When is a good time to write in your diary?

Assessment (parent/teacher)

Exit ticket (student)

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