Grade 5 · Writing · Lesson 32

Revise based on peer feedback

PEER FEEDBACK is one of the fastest ways to make a draft stronger. After hours staring at your own writing, you stop seeing it. A reader who comes in fresh notices the parts that drag, the sentences that confuse, and the ending that fizzles out — exactly the parts you cannot see anymore. Revision is not about doing what your friend says; it is about HEARING what they noticed, deciding what helps, and making your draft clearer and stronger while keeping YOUR voice.

What this lesson teaches

1Walk through the 3-step revision cycle: READ, DECIDE, REVISE
2Use a revision frame to plan changes after a peer review
3Match each peer comment to the right revision action
4Apply giver and receiver feedback rules to keep the cycle kind and useful

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