Lesson 12: Describe My Pet or Animal Friend

✍️ WRITING (40 Lessons)🔵 B. Writing About Experiences

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Objective

I can write a short paragraph that describes a pet or animal friend using what it looks like, sounds it makes, what it does, and its personality. I will end with a simple closing sentence.

Materials

Tip: Use the senses — look, sound, actions — and one word for personality (gentle, playful, brave…).

Mini-lesson — How do I describe an animal clearly?

  1. Start with the animal: Name it and tell the type/breed if you know it.
  2. Describe the look: Colors, size, fur/feathers, special marks.
  3. Add sounds and actions: What sounds does it make? What does it like to do?
  4. Show personality: Pick a word like curious, calm, or playful and give one small example.
  5. Close the paragraph: End with a sentence that wraps up your feelings or what makes the pet special.

Guided Practice — Trace on the Pad

Trace these key words, then draft a tiny paragraph (4–5 sentences) about your pet or an animal you like:

  • Key words: look, sound, actions, personality, because
  • Example outline:
    1. Topic: My cat Luna is small and gray.
    2. Detail: She meows softly and chases a string.
    3. Detail: Luna is curious and peeks in boxes.
    4. Closing: She is my calm and cuddly friend.
Tracing Pad
Tracing snapshot for print

Drag & Drop — Build Clear Descriptive Sentences

Drag the chips into the slots to make sentences that could fit your paragraph about a pet or animal friend.

MypuppyMaxissmallandbrown.
Shehassoftgrayfurandbrighteyes.
Myturtlemovesslowlybutnevergivesup.
Hebarksloudlywhenthedoorbellrings.
Myrabbithopsfastandlovesfreshcarrots.
Becauseheisplayfulhebringsmehistoy.
ShepurrssoftlywhenIbrushherfur.
Mybirdsingseachmorningbythewindow.
Heisgentlewithsmallchildrenandsitsbesidethem.
Sometimesshehidesinboxesbecausesheiscurious.
Afteralongwalkhesleepsonthemat.
Mypetisspecialbecausehemakesourfamilysmile.

Quick Check (15 questions)

1) What belongs in a descriptive paragraph about a pet?

2) Which is a good topic sentence?

3) Pick the look detail.

4) Pick the sound detail.

5) Which shows actions?

6) Which best shows personality?

7) Which detail fits “My bird is friendly”?

8) Best closing sentence:

9) Which sentence stays on topic for a cat?

10) Which joins ideas smoothly?

11) Which is the best topic → details → closing order?

12) Which is a strong detail?

13) Which word shows personality?

14) A sentence that does not fit the topic should be…

15) When you read aloud, you should check…

Assessment (parent/teacher)

Exit ticket (student)

I will practice…

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