Lesson 29: Writing a short message

✍️ WRITING (40 Lessons)🟣 D. Functional Writing

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Objective

I can write a simple short message with a greeting, message sentence, important detail, closing, and my name.

Materials

Mini-lesson — What is a short message?

A short message is a tiny note that gives someone important information.

We can write short messages when we want to tell:

  • where we are (I am at the park.)
  • when something will happen (Practice ends at 5.)
  • what we are doing (I am at Grandma's.)

Many short messages have five parts:

  1. Greeting — who it is to (Hi Mom, or Dear Dad,)
  2. Message — what you want to say
  3. Important detail — time, place, or what will happen
  4. Closing — friendly ending (Love, or From,)
  5. Name — your name

Example message:

  • Hi Dad,
  • I am playing at Mia's house.
  • I will be home at 4 o'clock.
  • From,
  • Leo

Short messages are not long stories. We choose the most important idea and write it clearly.

Picture strip: "Parts of a short message"

Guided Practice — Plan one short message

Use the Tracing Pad to warm up with message words. Then write your own short message on paper.

  1. Choose who it is for: Will you write to Mom, Dad, Grandma, or a friend?
  2. Trace message words: On the Tracing Pad, choose short words like Hi, Mom, home, park, today, or back and trace them slowly.
  3. Plan with your voice: Say out loud:
    • your greeting,
    • your main message,
    • one important detail (time or place),
    • your closing and name.
  4. Write on paper: On your ruled paper, write:
    • Line 1: greeting (Hi Mom,)
    • Line 2: message sentence
    • Line 3: important detail sentence
    • Line 4: closing (Love,)
    • Line 5: your name
  5. Check your message: Does it have all five parts? Is it neat and easy to read?
  6. Optional: Stick your message on a door or fridge so someone can really read it.

The Tracing Pad is only for warm-up. Your finished message must be written on your paper.

Tracing Pad
Tracing snapshot for print

Drag & Drop — Put the message in order

Each set has five lines from one short message: greeting, message, important detail, closing, and name. Drag the lines into the best order.

On the device:
For each message, drag the five lines into the boxes to make a complete short message in order.

On paper:
Choose three finished messages and copy all five lines on your ruled paper. Keep each part on its own line in your best handwriting.

Hi Mom, I am staying at school. We finish at 3:30. See you soon, Sam
Hi Dad, I am at the library. I will read with Mia. Love, Lena
Hi Mom, I am safe with Grandma. We are baking cookies. Love, Noah
Hi Dad, I am at soccer practice. Practice ends at 5. See you later, Omar
Hi Mom, I am sleeping over at Mia's. We will eat dinner and play. Love, Ella

Quick Check — Writing a short message

Answer each question about short messages. This is a gentle 10-question check.

What is a short message?

Which is a good reason to write a short message?

How should you start a short message?

In a short message, what should your main sentence tell?

Which sentence is an important detail for a message?

Which line is a good closing for a message?

Why should you use polite words like "please" and "thank you" in a message?

Why should you write your name at the end of a message?

What should your sentences be like in a short message?

How can you check if your short message makes sense?

Assessment (parent/teacher)

Exit ticket (student)

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